The following are responses to a workshop in which we described the kitchen of our childhoods. After that, we wrote about someone walking into that kitchen.
-I grew up in a house with six siblings as well as relatives, so the kitchen was a very important space... my mother's kitchen has a huge fridge with see-through glass so you can see in without opening it. The wallpaper had all sorts of veggis and fruit on it. The floor was hard pine wood. It was shiny, the kitchen was always clean. It smelled like cinnamon at all times because my mother cooks lots of sweets with cinnamon... the food that came out of that kitchen was miraculously good.
-I grew up in a house with six siblings as well as relatives, so the kitchen was a very important space... my mother's kitchen has a huge fridge with see-through glass so you can see in without opening it. The wallpaper had all sorts of veggis and fruit on it. The floor was hard pine wood. It was shiny, the kitchen was always clean. It smelled like cinnamon at all times because my mother cooks lots of sweets with cinnamon... the food that came out of that kitchen was miraculously good.
The
person (who walks into the kitchen) is named A_____, my DA. If
Alex were to come into my childood kitchen he would change a lot of
his opinions of me. He would see lots of violence, my mother being
thrown through the main wall that leads to the living room. He would
see me at the age of 4-12 hiding and praying not to be beaten by my
mother's husband. I would make sure to see him out once we are done
eating and ask him what he has to say now! Considering he has
degraded me for the past 3 years without thinking about my past or
any other aspect of my life besides the crime.
-C.S.
-The
kitchen of my childhood that I remember was big: it was always warm,
smelled good of mom's cooking, may her soul rest in peace. Sometimes
it did get a little loud because older sisters and brothers were
partying in the living room trying to talk over one another.
Someone
walks into the kitchen of my childhood, if they weren't family or a
close family friend they probably got the business from Mom or
someone else. If that wasn't the case, it was probably the cops
looking for one of my brothers or brother in laws.
-D.
-A long counter and many cupboards and
shelves, Smooth surfaces with the smell of lemon cleaner. Very open
area with an island close by. A pantry to the side with saloon style
doors, a table to the other side that no one ever uses.
A child walks into the kitchen, it is 3
am and he is being sneaky; he creeps in and climbs up onto the
massive counter-top. He reaches into the cupboard and silently pulls
out and starts eating the mini chocolate donuts. He puts the box back
and and slyly slips away. When confronted about eating the donuts
last night by his mother, he is shocked. How did you know?
He asked. She says that she knows everything he does, and he believes
her. Little did he know he had left donut crumbs on the counter.
-J.
These writings were in response to a prompt which asked the writer to describe the kitchen of their childhoods. After this was done, they were asked to write about what happens when someone (anyone) walks into the kitchen. I got the idea for this prompt from my creative writing teacher at UCSC.
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